29A – Venture Concept No. 2
1) Venture Concept Opportunity America, and the world, has an aging population. As birth rates in the U.S. decline, we are edging closer and closer to an economy with characteristics similar to countries like Japan, where the average age is 47. In the U.S., the average age is approximately 38, but that ticks higher every year. As our population grows gradually lower, our economy undergoes fundamental changes. We can look at Japan for an example of this sort of change. As the number of retirees rises and the number of workers falls, to things happen. First, selling pressure from retirees keeps stocks lower. Moreover, the country as a whole becomes less productive, as a smaller and smaller portion of the country support the remaining population. How has this worked out in Japan? Very similar to what is described above- Japan’s stock market has been stagnant for decades, the value of their currency has declined and their status on the world stage has shrunk. How does this apply to pe...
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